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Plan
get list of things that Tom says I'm Missing
- Needs more citations
- Standard econometric concerns: Endogenetiy, Simultineatiy, etc.
- Needs to justify why I am doing what I am doing. What do I add? Marketwide attempt to measure the impact of enrollment, an operational concern.
Integrate additional literature I've worked with. - How big of a concern is operational results (about 22% of failures) - Topics of how to address issues and what issues arise are common (give a couple of examples) - Efforts to reduce failures include better pharmokinetics, attempts at improving enrollment, better enrollment prediction (huge lit).
Then look at my outline:
- How can I adjust it to address those missing bits?
- How can I simplify the structure?
Maybe a discussion of concerns about simultineity/endogeneity/other confounds/etc is where I bring up the confounding parameters and then build a list of how things interact. I then use this to flesh out the DAG, and introduce the backdoor criterion.
I think I'll put this together as a bullet point draft, using the * and - notation for paragraphs and sentences respectively. Try to get the main points of each sentence/paragraph out.