Update 'Concept paper 2022 02 09'

Concept-paper-2022-02-09.md

@@ -24,10 +24,10 @@ Attempt to build a "cannonical" probabalistic model of the clinical trials proce
 - Documentation of code exists, and is useful.
 
 # Models
-The general benefit I can provide is to:
+A couple of general principles.
 
 - Describe the model in terms of conditional probability distributions (not expectations).
-- Model based on information known at the beginning of the trial.
+- Model based on information known at the beginning of the trial. (benefit of the [data] in use)
     - This might allow me to escape [[EK]]'s markov modeling approach for phase transitions.
 
 ## Phase completion: Joint Probability Estimation (single paper?)