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Identifying commercial impediments to successfully completing 
clinical trials in otherwise capable pharmaceuticals will hopefully 
lead to a more robust and competitive pharmaceutical market.
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Although the current state of this research is insufficient to draw robust
conclusions, these early results suggest that delaying the close of 
enrollment period reduces the probability of termination of a trial.
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% The successful completion of Phase III clinical trials is crucial for 
% bringing new treatments to market.  
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The primary limitation that must be addressed before drawing a strong conclusion
is that of insufficient data. 
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This takes two forms.
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The first is the small sample size. 
To overcome this requires an improved data matching 
approach and a revised data scraper.
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The second is creating a model of enrollment that can be used to address
the causal identification issue from the joint determination of
enrollment statuses and elapsed durations of trials.
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Despite these limitations, this work establishes a framework for analyzing 
operational versus strategic factors in clinical trial completion. 
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The approach developed here can be extended with additional data to 
provide more definitive guidance on enrollment management strategies. 
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Further research in this direction could help reduce operational 
barriers to trial completion or estimating the impact policies may have through
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Ultimately this work will hopefully support more efficient drug 
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